Transexual Jesus
Transsexual JesusI keep writing this poem about Jesus coming home after workingfor an unappreciative boss, anticipatingthe joy of peeling off those disgustingly sweatypantyhose from aching legs.In my...
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wow, i had no idea what to expect from that title. very interesting, very interesting... i'm still pondering those last two linesthanks for a unique readpjfrom east to west: c. crittenden, t. trendle,...
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I did have the final strophe read...and suddenly i hope no onefrom church ever reads this..this poem seems to piss off men...hooray for me, right?
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lol!you know, i like the last lines as you have them now much better. they leave me thinking.from east to west: c. crittenden, t. trendle, best of the net nomies & pj nights
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i am a mani am not pissed offi did get a laugh from the poemas well as realize the serious sideof itwell doneand a fine endingtom
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The title is the best thing about it. Maybe you should have done another clichelike soak in your probably dirty tub with your favorite scented candles from bath and body before attempting to write a...
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I have never known you to engage in such unpoetic personal attacks. Why start with me, eh?
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Hah! This here poem made me giggle madly...or maybe it was the title that made me giggle so. In any event, a lively read it was ;-).
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I'm glad it has a high giggle factor..that's a useful thing to have.
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